Young Alice

...Eh...was bored....listened to Snow Patrol- (ever need inspiration? Listen to 'What if the Storm Ends?' by SP.) Yup.

Beats and tunes

Dancing to the beat of my own drum.

I dont really listen to that,

I sing my own song.

I do my own thing.

Painting moonsets,

and dancing with fireflies in mason jars

lighting my backyard

on a sticky sweet summer evening.

Sharing memories and pictures

from my twelve year old mind

and eating gooey brownies.

Slowing time and casting light.

Fighting off shadows;

A princess to save the prince

locked away by duties,

fierce dragon by my side.

Dreaming of seeing the world through

my empty looking glass.

I'm a young Alice,

nothing can change that.

 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Very good ebb and flow to this...laughed a little at 'dragin'...was that intentional? Because everything else is spelled correctly, had to ask. If not...ummm...disreagrd the laughter *laugh*

Post more of your work!

[Daliah Valley]

Haha no...misspelled dragon. I was typing fast, what can I say? Thanks a whole lot for reviewing! I can't belive how this is actually good...b/c I really kinda figured it would stink. Again, thanks so much! I will try to post more- but I can't make any promises. My non-existant social life demands my attention!

[KAOlmsted]

No more self-doubt. You have talent.

[Daliah Valley]

Don't say that. I am trying to avoid getting a big head.

[Daliah Valley]

AH! Fixed it. :)

[KAOlmsted]

now you are truly brilliant! *grin*

[Daliah Valley]

Yay for brilliance! *smirk of sorts*

[Apatheia]

I love this so much and I love your reference to Alice.

[Daliah Valley]

Aw thanks! Yeah, she just kinda popped into my mind and demanded to be recorded. Can't say no to the girl in the blue dress. :P