My Wish

My Wish

A Poem by Little Amy Lee
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random on the spot poem

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If you had to take a chance

What chance would you take?

If you had to take a turn

What turn would you make?

If you had to make a wish

What wish would it be?

Cause my only wish

Is to have you with me

© 2009 Little Amy Lee


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I didnt want to carry it on, as i thought it would go better as a short poem and with the two lines it hences the name, but everyone to their own and thanks for the review =] x

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hmm, the last two lines were a disappointment to this reader. I like questions as they provoke, but I found the last two lines weak. But then you were not writing it for me. But there you are.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on July 31, 2009
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Little Amy Lee
Little Amy Lee

Skegness, United Kingdom



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I have this addiction, this addiction to write. To let all my feelings out. I could spend all day writing and due to this fact I made this account. I upload whatever and whenever I get the chance. .. more..

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