Everythings Changed

Random poem i made up

As I walk out this cram-packed plane

Through the airport

Then back out again

I glance around

Everythings changed

All the scenery

Is not the same

I thought I was home

But I guess im wrong

As now I know

The wrong plane I had gotten on

 

 

Reviews

"As i walk out this cram-packed plane". Wow, that line really gets me. I like "cram-packed" because I've never seen that before.

Once again, a good rhythm and way of expressing what you felt.