Survival

Poem made on the spot =]

As I walk down this empty street,

All the faces, I pass and meet

I know everyone looks at me,

They glance around, and what do they see?

 

A vampire lost in the middle of the night,

No one comes close, as they think ill bite

Ill hurt anyone I come upon,

I can help this, whats done is done

The blood fills my body with pure delight,

As I  hibernate away, through the daylight

Tmorrow night will be the same,

This is survival, not just a game!

 

 

Reviews

[Silere]

Well.. I'm a bit biased over vampire stories and poems.. so I definitely liked this one. But it was well written which made it very easy to read. Great job! Thank you for sharing!

[Joe]

This was well-written. Good job!

[Gema]

I love the way u describe everything even in this shory piece!
Very meaningful and descriptive well done xxx

[John Stussy]

Very nice vampire short poem. Usually when people rhyme they make it seem corny or try too hard with it. It's really relaxed the way you have done so though. Great job.