One Day...

I look through the window
though it's morning - there's no 
little sign of a raising sun.
No colours, no nothing - if I could see 
anything
apart from mind-blowing flashes
of an easy cheap attempt of
killing romance,
I'd die for such a
true living.

And one day, when we realize 
the whispering wind 
softly whispering in our ears - 
"Life's only one to live" 
We're gonna cry our bittersweet tears 
and drown into all the love 
we've missed.

But if for one day -
I'll have to wait - eternity - 
Oh, I shall, I will! 
If - for a chance of
kissing the lips of 
an unknown reality 
which I dearly miss.

(One day, oh one day...
I shall meet you again!)

Reviews

[Katie]

I keep coming back to this because I can't come up with anything constructive, and I generally dislike leaving reviews that say nothing but good work. But I have nothing else this time. This poem is pretty much flawless. Strangely though, I'm not sure its my favourite one of yours, but it IS certainly up there. This is a great poem. It flows really well, there aren't any other technical errors. Your word choice is excellent. And it conveys your message beautifully. Well done

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful poem. Remind of a old movie where the girl is waiting for her lover. I like the description and the story in the poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Angela]

"drown in all the love we missed" Wonderful imagery, and just about time all hope is gone, you inject it at just the right time.

[A]

Sweet and romantic poem... Made me long for some old memories :)
wonderful imagery!
I enjoyed this very much, well done.

[Maureen Mwaniki]

This is one of those poems u read and u sigh and u rake ur mind for smthng 2 say and all that pops up is beautiful!!
I love it

[howlfjdks]

I love the idea of reuniting, so beautiful.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful loving words! Nice write!

[Midnight_Mystery]

Great write, powerful! loved it

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I'd love to witness the reclaiming of all that was lost.

[Shiningwolf]

Powerful words there! Goodjob!