There Will Always Be An Open Door

A poem/lyric which portraits someone who's missing their soulmate.

More than friendship, ships just sail away

You’re my everything, my nothingness made of purity

Everlasting love, though I don’t need to be romantic

Our lips won’t touch, for our souls embrace together

 

But where did you go?

Oh it’s so foggy outside

Where did you go now?

Please tell me

where do you hide yourself from this creepy world

 

Your dark pretty eyes recognize all my needs and dreams

Your sweet fragile smile brings me back

all the energy they'd took away from me

My hands are shaking as my heart aches

You’re the one who keeps me going, soulmate

But where did you go?

I took a bath from my own tears

Where did you go now?

My heart’s filled with fear,

anxiety’s killing me

 

I used to laugh about all those things that you’d say

And just because the sound of your voice

really would take my breath away

I know no one would really understand me

But then again I had you right next to me

 

And years may pass, but I’ll never give up about seeing you again

People may talk, but I couldn’t care less

about empty heads

In this world full of disbelief, you’re my

sparkle of hope

You’re my shining star, please don’t fade away,

we’ll find home

I promise you, please don’t fade away

- you'll never be alone

Reviews

[Katie]

Wow. This is...I don't think I have a word for it. I want to say gripping, or haunting maybe. This poem is amazingly well written. It tugged at my heartstrings in the most pleasently wrenching way. There is such emotion in this poem. Excellent job

The only technical problem I noticed was that there should be a comma after again in this line "But then again I had you right next to me"

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

These are sweet loving words.
Your compassion signs through.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love of another and our children will always stay with us. I agree with your words. We need a open door for family and friends. Missed soul mate create a pain that can't be fixed except by their touch and love. The poem is excellent. I like the story and description in the words.
Coyote

[iamkim]

very nicely done. i love the flow of the story :) good job!

[M.J.Grace]

I can feel the emptiness through the words

[Stef Outsiders]

I think i have a soul mate, well a couple but I'm a little skeptic. Because I know if i believe that i'll lose them. You written this beautifully though and your words melt the heart...

[The Analog Kid]

Such a hopeful write. Longing "please don't fade away." Heart wrenching.

[KAREN]

Love it! I feel the longing and the heartbeark of this person yearning for her love not to go away!

[Rose Masen]

So beautiful, yet so tragic. Losing someone and feeling that love so profoundly after their presence is no more, is the most crippling pain I can imagine. An amazing job with this. Your words here are full of chills waiting to show face on a persons skin as they take in every word written. Favorites.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This just reaches out and grabs the reader at least it did me such longing so freshly penned I felt this tug my soul for one so young you shw amazing matuarty ane promise you can only improve I do so enjoy your writes they do something to my soul they reach out and touch me as few others can well done my friend well done indeed!