I am Sorry

I am Sorry

A Story by Amanda
"

I made a mistake and I can't fix it.

"

I made a mistake,

I miss you,

I need you,

In my life,

The pain is so hard to bear,

My tears won't stop running down my face

I miss your voice, I miss your laugh

I am sorry

I made a mistake,

and I may have lost you forever

I need you here with me

I can't stop thinking about you

I can't stop thinking I could have done something different

I am here, I am waiting for you

I may be waiting forever,

before I even realize that you won't be coming back,

I wish I could have held your hand

Now you won't speak,

I have lost apart of me,

I lost you

I never realized it until now...

 

I love you

© 2008 Amanda


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no ratings?!?!?! i will still comment then....gayyyy! jk. i really liked this poem. it kind of reminds me of a type of subtle love that a person has for another. a type of love in which just simply holding hands is the best thing ever. remember to always preserve yourself from guys. if you are to quick to love...it loses its beauty.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I know how you feel. good write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


You are such a great brother, thank you so much Mikey I love you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


no ratings?!?!?! i will still comment then....gayyyy! jk. i really liked this poem. it kind of reminds me of a type of subtle love that a person has for another. a type of love in which just simply holding hands is the best thing ever. remember to always preserve yourself from guys. if you are to quick to love...it loses its beauty.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 22, 2008

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