Tonight

Tonight

A Poem by Amanda
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Tonight 

I lay here thinking of you

Wondering in this crowded mind what to do

 

Tonight

I think of our first kiss

Your hug, voice, and scent I miss

 

Tonight

I feel numb, I can't breathe

 

Tonight

I shed a tear

Because of fear

Fear of losing you

 

Tonight

I think of us

I think of that night

You took my hands under the shooting stars light

That night

 

You said you love me

You said you want me to be

Yours

 

Tonight

I think of your smile

I am going to be awake for awhile

 

Tonight

I lay here in bed

Thinking of you too

 

Tonight

I just want to be with you.

© 2008 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
True story

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Nice job.
"You took my hands under the shooting stars light

That night"

This has some serious merit. The visual is great!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Amanda this is so beautiful, made me get a tear in my eye. A very nice write my freind.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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