I remember....

I remember,

That last day,

I remember,

The ending way,

I remember,

Every kiss,

I remember,

My peaceful bliss,

I remember,

You saying forever,

I remember,

Me saying together,

I remember,

You saying goodbye,

I remember,

The tears pouring from my eyes,

I remember,

All too well,

I remember,

The living hell.

 

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Wow, a few minutes earlier i was reading some stuffs from other writer and that writer's write was too about love and your're all about love too, Today i think i've made my day through both of you two writers stuffs. Thanks for making such a nice pieces and dropping by here as well. Keep writing, everyone loves reading loving as well as realistic pieces in a life and your stuffs're too real and simple. Your writes're really smooth and sensible. I loved this poem. Wonderful write, great job once again, you got my heart by your words.

[writ rajat]

its very fantastic poetic device you use in this poem i admire it