I love you so...

It was actually supposed to be a song but It wasnt exactly an option but I kinda wanted some feedback so yea...

You hold me close and hold me tight

There is nothing in the world, that could feel so right

I love you so, I love you dear

Losing you is my greatest fear

Your my whole world

Worth more than my life

I couldnt give you up without a fight

I see myself reflected in your eyes

And I just know its gonna be all right

You know my thoughts, My greatest fears

And everything that brings me to tears

You make my life so I dont cry,

But even then I'd sometimes sigh

And you'd pull me close onto your lap

Holding me till the bad times pass

Oh Baby dont you know?

I love You so...

 

 

Author's Note

Again It was supposed to be a song but wasnt an option! Ignore grammar please thanks :)

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is a nice written expression of emotion.

You draw the reader down, in to your
deep, loving need.

Well done !

----- Eagle Cruagh

[dilettante1890]

It's really romantic and sweet. The longing is palpable. I'm having a contest about Lolita inspired writing. The info is on my profile page if you are interested. Welcome!