EDNOS
A Book by Blue Belle
 EDNOS is a collection of short stories. Each story, "episode," has the name of a food.  © 2013 Blue Belle
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What do you think about having a collection of short stories?
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I think it's a good idea, I enjoy short stories immensely and its a great skill to capture an idea in such a small amount of words. Plus if it's a collection, that will allow you to focus on specific themes for each of them and as a whole they could paint a pretty interesting picture.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks. I am trying to work on the first one, but I don't feel that it is good enough.
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11 Years Ago
What do you need to do to make it better?
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11 Years Ago
I feel like it's not long enough or that it's not descriptive enough
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11 Years Ago
Do you feel like it is a proper representation of the idea in your head? Or is the idea what is lack.. read moreDo you feel like it is a proper representation of the idea in your head? Or is the idea what is lacking? Since it's a short story I wouldn't worry about the length, and as for the descriptions: Are they clearly expressed? It would help to have an excerpt or something.
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11 Years Ago
I guess I will post it, that way others may help me edit.
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I think it's a good idea, I enjoy short stories immensely and its a great skill to capture an idea in such a small amount of words. Plus if it's a collection, that will allow you to focus on specific themes for each of them and as a whole they could paint a pretty interesting picture.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks. I am trying to work on the first one, but I don't feel that it is good enough.
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11 Years Ago
What do you need to do to make it better?
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11 Years Ago
I feel like it's not long enough or that it's not descriptive enough
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11 Years Ago
Do you feel like it is a proper representation of the idea in your head? Or is the idea what is lack.. read moreDo you feel like it is a proper representation of the idea in your head? Or is the idea what is lacking? Since it's a short story I wouldn't worry about the length, and as for the descriptions: Are they clearly expressed? It would help to have an excerpt or something.
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11 Years Ago
I guess I will post it, that way others may help me edit.
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Added on April 13, 2013
Last Updated on April 13, 2013
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Blue BelleElmira, NY
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I am thirty years old. I'm dealing with a mood disorder/depression, anxiety, an eating disorder, borderline personality disorder, self-harm, and suicidal thoughts. I love writing. and most of my works.. more..
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