Finally giving up.

Finally giving up.

A Poem by Pixieblue
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Quite personal to me, im fed up of the runaround.

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I actually give in so much now,

I have tried and I have tried to make things go right.

Now I realize that the only reason they weren't is because,

 I’m the only one that want’s that.

And that’s not even fair anymore…

 

It’s not fair  that I’m still waiting,

After four years…

I may still be in love with you,

But that hurts too much now.

So I guess I need to move on.

 

You’re ruining my life and you haven’t even said a word to me,

Just in your silence said everything I didn't want to hear.

I can’t think properly,

I can’t function in everyday life.

It would help if everywhere didn't remind me of you,

Then id be able to make conversation without trailing back to the past.

 

© 2014 Pixieblue


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u've expressed it all soo beautifully. even i've felt the same soo many times. was juz obsessed of my life.....!!! gud 1 liked it alot

Posted 10 Years Ago


Its like we are living the same life. I can really relate to your every word. Deep.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Read this listening to "Justin Timberlake - Not a Bad Thing - (Cover by Andy Scalise feat_ Alle Bettale)", believe me when i say this is beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Strong and very relatable, another well written piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Strong emotion well portrayed, and relatable concept, great piece :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I would change the amount of lines in each stanza to four and remove the punctuation, but it's good to go otherwise.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Sometime as enough is enough! Well written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The fact is that relationships are hard and even harder when there is only one partner trying .Well said Pixie :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 15, 2014
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Pixieblue
Pixieblue

kent, gravesend, United Kingdom



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I'm Leah. Here's a few things to know about me: I'm an artist. I'm a musician. I'm a writer. I have ADHD. I'm dark at heart. I think everyone is wonderful who knows how to love and be loved/ .. more..

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