Moonlight dance...

I'm in the mood for a good fantasy animal, i want to know what it would feel to change into a wolf, like a shape shifter. As your bones break to form new ones, and your blood curdles.

Cold, crunching leaves beneath my feet,
heartbeat pounding to my head,
darkness coming over me like a dread,
of the moon coming out tonight.

Lost, from where did i come,
twists and turns through the trees,
blood pouring from my knees,
teeth like razorblades, oh no this can't be me.

Pain, shooting through my veins,
shooting up a drug that drums hard,
too many i have scarred,
when the moonlight travels through me.

I'm loosing it now for this is the end,
till the morning arrives i can only depend.
On my teeth and my claws and my lovely thick coat,
and the blood of the sacrifices of which i shall soak.

My age is four digits yet im only 23,
i didn't get to choose any of this,
the savage killed my family,
not me, and here i be.

Author's Note

Please let me know your thought's.. really enjoyed writing this...
The words just flowed.

Reviews

[Thomas Skahill]

I like how your heartbeat pounds up to your head, creative. Keep up the work!

[Eddie M deadwolf]

Right on friend, your dreams lived out in words that will never fade, your dark side is callin, comin out of you like a dream, gone crazy an feelin so mean, nothing is real when it comes over you... Dig that man, you described it so vividly, could feel me self changing, right on, very well done my friend: Eddie / deadwolf

[TheLoneWriter]

I loved your poem! Everything just went so well together and merged into a single thought, loved it!

[ron]

Love the poem, dark yet alluring.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh I really liked this especially since I love shapeshifters and werewolves and all those vampires too lol.This is really excellently written I imagine this is how it would be if that happened :)

[Shanna Bryant]

Oh bravo!!!!!! Yes the words flowed like stardust. I loved it!!!!!