Remember me

After my breakup its been 2 months, i still feel pretty wrecked, it didn't help i was kicked out of my home afterwards. This is what i feel. the last knots in my tummy.

I don't even remember your scent,
or how your kisses felt.
I don't even remember how to smile,
or how my heart would melt.

I'm trying to remember your touch,
while im scared and breaking down.
I'm picturing you saying you love me,
while winding my noose round.

i feel my heart is broken,
my mind is no longer there.
I know that you would not miss me,
but what's to miss isn't there.

Author's Note

I haven't written or been home in 2 months.

please leave your thoughts

Reviews

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

And then i decide to go through my reading requests, and my eyes browses through the writers names and yours quickly grips the attention of my mind. Yes its her - i like her poems... Then i decide to read this - and surely it feels so relevant, an experience that is still fresh to my feelings. " i feel my heart is broken,
my mind is no longer there. I know that you would not miss me, but what's to miss isn't there" ...surely an emotion i share.

Thanks for a great write, you always manage to stay relevant and write about --- reality.

Please read my poems too - i am sure you will like.

Thanks.

[Anabel Sy]

I think it's lovely when a person's poem rhymes while maintaining a generously sombre tone with a touch of simplicity. Well done.

[Wolfwind]

Id say that the piece creates the feeling of sorrow, mixed with the strength of keep on walking. For even though the floor gave way and you went down some, each step afterwards is positive step. A new step, into a new direction that holds more light. A hope light.

That's what my thoughts are. =)
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Pixieblue]

Thankyou, i am on my own two feet now... supporting my life, its just a lingering pain :)