Its over now.

Dam i have to stop writing my upset poems. Suck it up they say. Find someone new they say. NO

Yet now were over i feel that burn,
that your not there anymore.
Cant even say it was for the best,
horrible craving for more.

The worst thing is when i felt like this,
its you who id tell first.
Looking back on the memories,
like some horrible unfair curse.

Its been a long time that you were mine,
and now its come to a close.
I wish you luck and a tear stained farewell,
But now i have to go.

Author's Note

Its only small.
Its whats going through my head.
Please take a look if you would.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Nice piece you've dropped from your Head :) I liked it's depth and reality. You dig it. You made this piece from your heart and your were thinking about someone when you made this i think.
very great write... keep writing and posting ! :)

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

i totally think i do feel how you feeling. i went through a minor heartbreak a couple of weeks ago and its still a little heavy on me - so it all makes sense. Great write.

[Shadey Jadey]

There is a deep sadness here. You have captured your thoughts, and your emotions very well. You will find another one day, and that pain will eventually stop. Nice work