Velmera

At the very beginning
I was the light beam through heavy clouds,
the song sung by angels, the mind-mending
salvation.

At the take off
I was promises and dreams undreamed,
limited regret and your path to much-longed
escape.

Halfway
I was the finest writing pen that would
never fail you. The smoothest path through
hell.

Nearing eternal
I was unruly storms and lightning.
A part of you that always bent towards the
flame.

In the end
I was the pain without proper gain.
The unrepentant chaos yearning
equilibrium.

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I do love this line: 'I was the finest writing pen that would never fail you.'

[...]

. it would be impossible to forget this powerful piece of writing ...
. i relate to the last stanza especially ...

[Emily B]

these words remind me of something

[Diane]

This is excellently written.

[screamin'ian]

Mmmm. "...unrepentant..." wish I'd written this ;)

Wow! I love your use of words! You are so talented...never give up on poetry.