Love Your Children

Love Your Children

A Poem by LisetteCanWrite!
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The greatest love in this world.. so under-rated.. so strong they can overcome almost any obstacle.. our children!!! Fill them with love, music, laughter, fun.. don't ever give up!!!

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The Legacy I will surely leave;

the air surrounding the lungs I breathe.

The laughter is just all around;

they bring true joy.. I have always found.

 

Within my heart each and everyday;

even though they wander miles away.

Always in my heart and on my mind;

thoughts of my CHILDREN you will always find.

 

I teach to live, dream and feel

and embrace any and all worst fears.

I also teach them feelings;

it's okay to express each and all bittersweet tears.

 

Clouds are clearing for my oldest one;

soon she'll shine down her soul full of sun.

She's special, pretty and really smart;

I love her so deeply with all of my heart!

© 2009 LisetteCanWrite!


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i HAVE TO ADMIT I SHED A TEAR FOR THE THOUGHT OF YOUR LOVING WAYS
TATE

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww...that made me tear up. I'll bet your children appreciate this as much as mine do when I write something for them. Spoken like a great mommy! Thank you for sharing such a personal piece.


-Jamie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And the leisure time with this was inspiring and warm and charming. Thanks

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome. I have two kids myself and I agree with all your words. Isn't it amazing and sad how time really flies; seems like days ago they were babies.
I liked and share the feelings of the second stanza the most. Always on your mind.
Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One Word!

"BEAUTIFUL!"

Art

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the simple loving beauty of this poem. Perfect. ty PS

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow simple divine... i may have never had children but been a son and I know that my moms teaching stay with me everywhere I go... the greatest influence on a kid is the parents... wonderful words of wisdom.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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