My Lady in White - A Fantasy!

This is my entry to the "Lady in White" contest.. enjoy!

 

My pure Lady in White;

fairest beauty in the land.

Where does she get her true beauty;

please help me understand.

 

She is my brightest ray of light;

more radiant than the sun.

Then her moon rises up;

as a man I am mortally done.

 

Her auburn hair it whispers;

sweet nothings - I breathe that air.

People don't always see it in you;

but I know they'll never compare.

 

Her aura is devine;

she's astute and so polite.

The ground I walk is not worthy;

you are truly such a sight.

 

Her voice how it does sing;

she's as free and sweet as a bird.

She chants the loveliest tunes;

bringing tender joy to all who have heard.

 

She is my fair maiden;

A prince's surest delight.

I am proud to behold;

My Lady In White.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I am shotting in the dark.. not sure if this is a contest to give as a present to a wife or sister or just something to do... either way I like fantasy and romance!

Reviews

[Kelley]

This is beautiful Lisette! I loved the way the poem flowed and
the way it made me feel. I hope you won!

Thanks for vision of grace.

Kelley

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Wow i love this poem...i love fantasy and romance to :)
Great job

[aj tanze]

Her auburn hair it whispers;
sweet nothings - I breathe that air.
People don't always see it in you;
but I know they'll never compare.

this is beautiful; i love it

[LatoyaEvans]

This was a wonderful piece. I enjoy your work.

[Meredith Leigh]

'Her aura is devine;

she's astute and so polite.

The ground I walk is not worthy;

you are truly such a sight.'

I thought this was wonderful! Ity painted a beautiful picture, and I found it joyful to read.
Good job!

- Kriss

[Sensuous2000]

Yes you do like it and it comes across clearly in your writing thanks for sharing it and I hope the contest went well??

[phoenix on the rise]

very sweet and gentle, capturing the essence of beauty. i like it. keep up the good work

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Her auburn hair it whispers;
sweet nothings - I breathe that air.
People don't always see it in you;
but I know they'll never compare.

Great verse, it is true that beauty is in the eye of the beholder and inner beauty is what counts the most... a fantastic write, it may be fantasy but it holds up in real life.

[Lady leah]

Very nicely penned, great write.