Believe In You

(Verse 1)

Take this mindless heart away from me

I know I’ll feel better if it can’t beat

Take this hopeless feeling away from me

I know I’ll feel better when I can’t feel a thing

 

(Bridge 1)

These dreams of mine aren’t mine at all

How could I have believed they were true?

This warmness I once felt from you is cold

How could I have believed in you?

 

(Chorus)

Aren’t you sick of this dying love?

My love, can’t you see it’s killing us

Can’t you feel my life fading?

As you claim your heart feels lifeless

And all this time I felt you were there

Keeping me alive, but only to be worthless

 

(Verse 2)

Deny this darkness that surrounds me

I know I’ll feel better if I can’t see

Deny this screaming from deep within me

I know I’ll feel better I can deny everything

 

(Bridge 2)

This hollow soul of mine has been broken

How could I have believed it would live?

These cold lies I believed from you lone ago

And now I don’t believe in a single thing you ever did

 

(Chorus)

 

I don’t need to understand

Author's Note

This is a song I wrote... pretty dumb, but I want you to tell me what you think.

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

This explores a feeling I have often pointed out. The theme is not the lying devil as is the case with most tragic romances. It is different. You cannot truly feel anything...it doesn't feel like love.
"This warmness I once felt from you is cold"
That line says it all. The line at the end..."These cold lies I believed from you lone ago" (it should be long i guess...) Anyhow this line appears to be a mistake. The feelings is nothingness more than betrayed love. It's like he's a really nice guy...that's it...no real feelings. That's my take. And I think that's fairly common.

[- - -]

It's not dumb at all. I love bridge 1. Heck, I love the whole song. It's beautifully written. :) great job

[deadlysilence]

I like this song a lot I don't think its dumb at all I think its actually really something people can relate too