The Sunlight

The Sunlight

A Poem by Color of the Iris

Many find their world to be without Sunlight

Their life a freezing, lifeless, inhabitable void

That consumes the sanity you once contained

And leaves you gasping for a breath at the end

 

The Sunlight that they long for represents happiness

A harmonious joy that sings throughout their heart

A loving body that leaves its mark upon their soul

Leaving you breathless and ravenous for more of it

 

But it is the difficult lesson we have all come to learn

Sunlight is not an element we can always depend on

Lending your trust within the Sunlight is useless

It’s like expecting a painkiller to relieve you completely

 

Useless… completely useless, worthless, nothing

The Sunlight will not always be there for you

And most times it’s not there when needed most

Like a question in the darkness waiting to be answered

 

And if the answer is thought reasonable enough

The Sunlight will grant you with a response

Just remember, the answer may not be one you wish for

For it is always somewhere beyond the clouds

Watching… waiting for that soulless question

© 2011 Color of the Iris


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Color of the Iris
This is a sequel to The Other World... read, review, rate, and enjoy. :)

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I haven't read the Other World, but I'll tell you this poem is nice. It makes a point. I luv the way you used "soulless" at the end :-D


Posted 13 Years Ago


Solid and creative :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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that is why we invented solar power!..for when the sun don't shine...you still get the benefits!!! Another beautiful and solid poem..well delivered analogy..you can't just depend on one source of light in your life..

Posted 13 Years Ago


You're so creative. No one might think about writing a poem about "The other world" this is fantastic!
I loved the second stanza the most!
Great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, this was really deep i loved it! great write! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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