Mission: Erase The Name

(Chorus)
Mission: erase the name!
(Erase the name!)
Mission: feel your hate!
(Escape the fate!)
Mission: to die alone in vain!
Labeled completely insane!
(By you!)

It's a promise for me to complete
To erase everything you knew about me
This new character I am will thrive
And you can just pray you'll survive

(Bridge)
I'll bleach my eyes
And dye my hair
You know I'll do anything
To become your worst nightmare

(Chorus)

Swallowed up in your pride, too blind to see
The lowly monster you can't help but becoming
But you know you won't make it
Your life's not yours if I can take it

(Bridge)

(Chorus 2xs)

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

Again, I find the irony of this piece breathtaking!
Changing oneself to become another's worst nightmare, finding piece in an enemy's terror, however one who's acceptance you so obviously crave, and having being denied it, you reconstruct yourself. your nightmare attire like a plea for merciful, pitiful love. AGAIN - the concept was SO interesting and mind boggling, and when understanding hits, the reader breathes out like a wave of peace has washed over them. great work, keep writing!

[Sweets]

I loved the flow. It's perfectly written :)
Great work!

[Liza]

I'm noticing a pattern from "the Sacrifice"

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This is great because you sing the words in your head (well I did) ..I can hear a pumping bass ...empowering lyrics..you write lyrical words that are not fluffy ..your words have a message..keep up the great work

[Dreamer<3]

Woah. This is upbeat in my opinion. I imagine like a group of people screaming the part in parenthesis when I read it. This is good though!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Nice flow and really well worded, I liked this once a lot, really well written; great job!~

[cfix]

I like this one, so well done you have an amazing flow going on and real nice rhyme scheme. I could actually hear this one as I read it. Awesome tune!

[lawrence bear]

You know these songs to me, sound like its metal rock, but that's me :) awesome piece by the way. Loved it.