You v.s. Me (Reflections)

Take a deep breath
Jump inside
This body, it doesn't
Feel right
Staring in the mirror
Guilty pride
Wondering which face is
Really mine

(Chorus)
I'm afraid of you
You, the one inside of me
I know I can't control you
So, the take over's beginning

Just open up the door
Step through
Looking out windows that
Reflect you
Turning from this face that
Isn't true
Walking away, I fall right
Into you

(Chorus)

It's this second face
That takes my place
In the world I know I had to have once lived in

Hated and despised by
Everyone and I try
To fight you, but just like me, you won't give in

(Chorus)
I'm no longer afraid of you
Yeah, you, the one inside of me
You're a failure to complete
The fatal mission inside of me

Author's Note

This is just another one of my random song writings... honest opinion... :)

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

Really like it honey, I can see what you mean about the changes in your writing, every change brings something new to your talent which is constantly growing, you will continue to be fabulous as you grow. x

[FireWoman]

It resonates the masks we all wear for society. A different face for each occasion, it is only at home where we peel the layers off to truly see ourselves.

[Liza]

imagery and emotion intact - the theme compliments the sacrifice and mission:erase the name

[Kelley]

Your quite the song writer girl.
Keep it up can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Kelley

[Arsenic Nemesis]

I liked this a lot, really intriguing and deep! Great job, keep up the good work!~

[Dreamer<3]

I think this is really good! I wish I could hear the tune to it, but just the lyrics are amazing.

[cfix]

well i thought it flowed super, wonderful! I adored the words. Very well written. I can sense where you are coming with this write and found some truth in it. Very well presented!

[D S Rollins]

Nice.

[WayOath]

No kidding. It is powerful. The word choice is ah-mazing. The concept is bleeding like hell through the words. Its strong and forces you to look and see what you are saying. Nice job.

[Billie Hanzen]

really really good! loved it :)
the first verse is really great :) 100/100