Leave It All With Me

You must explain one thing to me

How am I expected to survive

When all that you do is hurting

Every fragile thing in my life

Corruptly captivated by you

Lost in another state of mind

I am locked away in sorrow

Pain in your relentless eyes

 

How am I supposed to help you?

All you want is to be heard

And honey, I’m listening for you

But from you, I hear not a word

You turn away from all that I am

Thinking I’m nothing more than absurd

Even after I try to help you in this state

And I try to touch you and heal your hurt

 

You turn away from the light of the day

You know I’m the best thing you’ve ever known

And still you turn and run and hide yourself away

Please don’t hate me

After me being there for you this way

You don’t have any room

 

You’re the only peace I can find

And you cause me the greatest pain I’ve ever felt

You bring me to a sweet mental state

But you leave your suffering with me to be dealt

 

And I just know I love you

And I know I will always hate you

So, no more crying

Because I’m here for you…

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

Selflessness even in the pits of despair, there are parts of you that are added to as you grow but still supply the base to your being, beautiful.

[Tatiana]

weaknesss is ur own foolishness, suffering only on the body,
he may turn away from the light of day, but he needs your arms to crease his soul, keep your spirit strong and follow ur heart
good job
xoxox tati

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what an emotional rollercoaster..

[FireWoman]

This speaks volumes. The question remains, should you want to be with a person like this, or are you falling back into a pattern formed long ago?

[Jonathan De Elvira]

s**t...now i feel kinda guilty...because of my own weakness...
this piece pierced my chest...like a sharp needle they are...

[Dreamer<3]

This is really deep. At first I didn't understand, because I wasn't paying enough attention. I reread it, and I completely understand. This is truly wonderful.

[FallenHeroXx]

this is really good :) i like it :D Great read :D keep up the good work :D


Fallen

[D S Rollins]

This is sad. I know how it feels to have everything planted on you.. and you take everything because you love the person. Love is something else. This is wonderfully written, again I can just feel the emotion, it's like subdued hurt, but covered up for the person who is loved... *sigh*