My empty heart.

Well here's that time again.

where all had gone, my life concealed within,

an empty prison.

My heart just an empty muscle,

of where my first love left it behind,

leaving only but a trace of my existence.

I lay here knowing that all I love has gone to you,

and you place it alone cold and without a care,

I feel empty as if you've taken all my life with you.

I'll love you till the end of time, your life was my rock that held me together in this bleak and horrible  place I call home.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.

Reviews

[MachinaWriter]

I loved that first stanza. Amazing flow in that piece with some powerfully imagery. Great work there. I know this feeling, as I'm sure a lot of people do. I think you may like a poem of mine called The Heartbreaker, if this is about a relationship that ended. If its about a lover who died, you might like The Devil Wears Blue. I'd love to hear your thoughts on some of my writing, if you ever get the chance. Either way, this was an amazing poem. I keep re-reading that first stanza, I like it so much lol Thank you so much for sharing this ^^