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A Poem by LiquidWonderland
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There isn't much to describe.

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Hand in hand, metal to flesh, no words need to be spoken
Nothing needs to be said.

Slowly breathing, eyes decieving, we're not dreaming
The world IS screaming

Feel your heart beating, hold your last breath
Now smile for the camera, and pose for your death

Fingers getting nearer, bullets smash the mirror, don't worry my dear
Now everything's clearer

© 2008 LiquidWonderland


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Kind of short but you did get your point across.
Great write thanks for sharing.
Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


the world truly is screaming,
i like the idea of everything being clearer when you can't see yourself.
it's very insightful.
nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, short and sweet.. leave them asking for more...lol I like it lots!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. I liked it very much i wish there was more though.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 16, 2008

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LiquidWonderland
LiquidWonderland

Toledo, OH



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