Feeling the wind

Feeling the wind

A Poem by The_Fox
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Just a light poem to get my creative juices flowing. Its been a while xP

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On high plains, and low fields the wind blows.

Through the grass and in the trees, the wind goes.

Like water in a stream. Effortlessly, the wind flows.

Through ones hair the wind shows, feel the wind.

Softly it whispers in one's ears, hear the wind.

Gently it tickles one's nose, smell the wind.

Look around you, high and low. See the wind....


© 2013 The_Fox


Author's Note

The_Fox
Really this probably isn't the best work anywhere. I was only partially paying attention when I wrote it.

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Thanks, heh glad you like my comments as well. Haha just putting my thoughts into it after I'm done. But I am glad you enjoyed the read

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your author's notes are cute. Partially paying attention or not, I like the rhythm, structure, and imagery of the piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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The_Fox
The_Fox

Prescott Valley, AZ



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I am fairly new to the writing scene. At one time I had been posting stories on another writing site, but the site shut down before I could complete what I had going. I can only hope that others will .. more..

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