Secrets of the heart

Secrets of the heart

A Poem by Beth Lindsay
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Short simple and straight to the point.

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I love him 
He hates me
I miss him
He don't me
I want to tell him
He won't let me

© 2012 Beth Lindsay


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Oh I love this! I love the simplicity of it. I love the last two lines, "I want to tell him, he won't let me." it's such a heartbreaking feeling when they won't hear you out. Great job!

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Added on May 14, 2012
Last Updated on May 14, 2012
Tags: heart ache, Love

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Beth Lindsay
Beth Lindsay

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I am a college student, studying to become a writer. My desired career is in graphic novels, but I also enjoy writing short fiction and poetry. Aside from my writing ambition, I paint/draw, read, and .. more..

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