Time ticks away

Time ticks away

Daylight descends beyond the horizon

the born cries out

while the dead sleeps in their beds

Time ticks away

while you laze around inside 

on a sunny day

Time ticks away

Only to find the following 

rainy and cloudy

Time ticks away

It seems to go on and on

and you wish it would be over

but once it is over

 you wish you had more time

Reviews

[selkietales]

Great description! I'm kinda wondering where all my time is going lol

[Alex Vidmar]

Beautiful Love it.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

We must use the time we have for trying to accomplish things that truly matter, not to worry about irrelevant stuff.
I enjoyed this poem, well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem tell a true story. Time is our most valuable access. A wise person find time for the good things in a life. Or wished he did. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[0AudreyClaire0]

I really liked this. And the message is great. :)
-Aud

[Hana Linzi]

I TRULY ENJOYED THIS POEM KEEP IT UP!!