Death

The major questions

Death

what lies beyond its boundaries?

is it a fiery pit of chaos and torment?

or is it a warm light beyond the clouds?

or is it simply a lonely world of pure darkness?

Death

is it an entity?

with incomprehensible powers

with just one touch

decides who live and who dies

Death

is it a force?

one that we can not challenge

a law of nature

that shows no mercy

Death

is it truly the end or just another world

one that we can not enter in flesh

like our hearts wishes and longs for

with past relatives and old friends

Death

many fear it for it is an uncertain ending

a world that we can’t enter

an entity we can not study

a force we can not explain

Death

whoever or whatever it is

truly is the most powerful in this world

the most mysterious ruler

neither good nor bad

Author's Note

Give your honest opinion.

Reviews

[J.O.]

Hey there, I made a few changes (mostly grammar). That aside I loved it!!!


Death

what lies beyond its boundaries?

is it a fiery pit of chaos and torment?

or is it a warm light beyond the clouds?

or is it simply a lonely world of unending darkness?

Death

is it an entity?

with incomprehensible powers

with just one touch

decides who lives and who dies

Death

is it a force?

one that we can not fight

a law of nature

that shows no mercy

Death

is it truly the end or just another world?

one that we can not enter in the flesh

like our hearts wishes

with past relatives and old friends

Death

many fear it for it is an uncertain ending

a world that we can’t enter

an entity we can not study

a force we can not explain

Death

whoever or whatever it is

it truly is the most powerful in this world

the most mysterious ruler
neither good nor bad