Love you for a while...

Love you for a while...

A Poem by Linspacey
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Where does love end?

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In the depths of night I waited for you.
In the wake of morning I held on for you.
In the dawn of my sunrise I cried for you.
In the midst of my sunset I stayed for you.
In the life of day I missed you.
Everyday I loved you.
Every time you left, I stayed...
waiting,
crying,
smiling,
living,
dying,
standing.
Everywhere you were, I wasn't and even then,
I remained.
When you walked away, I always stayed close behind.
Once you said those three words I'd waited a lifetime to hear,
I already loved you.
And even when you reversed those very words
to tell me the only thing that could break me to dust,
I still loved you.
I loved you then,
I'll  love you tomorrow, next year
and I love you now...
Even if you don't

© 2010 Linspacey


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Wow! An amazing write! This was really deep, and held a lot of passion and emotion. I thought that the listing was effective, and I felt that through doing that, you built up the tension, making this a really captivating write. I could relate to this poem so much, and I loved the way you worded the ending. A beautiful piece. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Can someone come read this to me every night? As a bedtime story? I love this one, it is really felt and passionate. I can easily relate to this poem, I know how it feels. It's like, a story translated to an effective and meaningful poem, with a quick pace and heart-felt emotions. Nice write =) Looking forward to reading more of your writings!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! An amazing write! This was really deep, and held a lot of passion and emotion. I thought that the listing was effective, and I felt that through doing that, you built up the tension, making this a really captivating write. I could relate to this poem so much, and I loved the way you worded the ending. A beautiful piece. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Linspacey
Linspacey

South Jersey, NJ



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