How to move...

How do you move when everything else has stopped?

When the words that flow from our mouths go right to waste what do you do?

When nobody wants to hear your cry or see your pain what do you do?

When the world keeps moving around you like nothing's wrong while at the same time your falling apart, what do you do?

When pain is as easier than happiness, what do you do?

When everything comes crashing down before you and nothing is left to feel good about, what do you do?

When love or life isn't enough to keep you happy, what can help you?

When love is just a faint memory fluttering in the back in your mind, what's filling the rest of your mind?

When your life isn't enough to sustain you, what is?

When you'd rather give up everything right here and now and risk the chance of ever seeing a brighter day how can you stop?

When your body has given up more hope than your heart has

how do you move?

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

This was really thought-provoking and intriguing! I was drawn into your thoughts and musings from your very first line, and am still thinking about what you've described in your poem now! I really liked the surreal, introspective tone of your poem, and thought that it was really creative how you wrote the whole piece using rhetorical questions. Very interesting indeed! Great write,
~PaperHearts

[Linspacey]

Interesting