What More Could You Want?

You made me cry, you made me bleed,

Please....what more could you want from me?

You hurt me more then I could say

I should hate you in every way.

But it doesn't matter what I say,

I cant' get myself to stay away.

You made me cry, you made me bleed,

Please....what more could you want from me?

I loved you from the day we met,

That is something I will always regret.

You loved me too, don't try to deny,

And yet somehow I feel, it was all just a lie.

You made me cry, you made me bleed,

Please....what more could you want from me?

You stole my heart, then left me to bleed,

Left me to die, alone and deceived.

This heartache was but so long ago,

Yet to me the pain shall always regrow.

You made me cry, you made me bleed,

Please....what more could you want from me?

I have someone new, so leave me alone,

Let me move on, let me on my own.

Yet now and to forever, I know you will be there,

Always keeping me alone, and never pulled out of you.

Author's Note

Sorry the end doesn't work well I had to get across my point. Please comment. I hope you liked it.

Reviews

[CyndiR]

I like it a lot! People are do deeply hurt because they have once love them so deeply. I can see it in your poem, I feel the pain, but yet the love behind. I truly love the emotions, and the strong power under the poem as well!
Great Write!
~CyndiR

[Tasha]

I do like it..a lot. I could feel you love to be around him, and then you hate him. I have experienced this many times before. Excellent write.
♥ Ta'Shandra