Depot

Depot

A Poem by LR Young

i filled my pockets with silt
to root me; coal black mud
to suit me and my
traipsing through
raindrops, splashing
in little red galoshes. I can
still remember those
4 am whistles blowing
as the train billowed
through town like ghosts
of iron and steel,
clickity-clack
across tracks as I
lied awake in the sill
of windows;
I can tell by
your eyes its been
too many years searching
for grace, nights spent
sleeping, loosening the grip
of lullabies in bottles or
places where love
seems so close you can
almost taste its lips, but
in that storm and that sky,
an indigo simmering of last
lights, last chances, you can feel
the wind stilling, the last call is
coming. So like lyrics, like trains
whistling ditties,
so long darlin',
time to move on;
I won't ever leave you
again behind me more than
the length of my hands.

© 2009 LR Young


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LJW
"an indigo simmering of last lights, last chances..."

One of the best lines I have read in a poem, ever.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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LR Young
LR Young

Boulder, CO



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LR Young completed her Masters in Literature in Spring of 2009. Her current emphasis is poetry, the intimacy of words and string of consciousness revelations, rhythm and imagery. It is just as Ginsber.. more..

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