Carla and EvanA Story by LindaLouA short romance showcasing the first meeting of true soul mates.CARLA She had waited impatiently all week for
Friday night to come along. She was dressed in comfortable, faded jeans and her
favorite pair of well-worn boots. In her favorite white lace blouse, Carla was
ready for girl’s night out. She wore silver and turquoise around her neck, with
matching earrings swaying from underneath her long auburn curls. She didn’t
wear much make up, just enough to accent her large, deep brown eyes. Carla carefully checked her appearance
once more in the vintage, full-length mirror that had belonged to her mother.
She loved that old mirror, with its gold leaf edging and mahogany frame. It was
one of the few things left to her when her mother passed away many years ago. Giving herself a good to go nod, she
rushed through the small house where she lived alone with her black cocker
spaniel. He was fast asleep, curled up on the worn, comfy couch, full from the
supper he had just finished. She stopped to kiss the top of his soft head and
tell him to be a good boy. At the front door, she grabbed her warmest coat from
the wooden rack, tucked her small leather clutch under her arm and headed out
the door with keys in hand. EVAN I drove over that Friday night to spend
some time with my sister and our aunt. They were going out to the local sports
bar and thought I would enjoy the band that would be there. After I got a motel
room and some dinner, I headed over to the club. I remember thinking to myself
that the place looked sort of run down. I paid my cover charge, grabbed a beer
and found a table. I was there pretty early; I could see only about ten people.
An old guy came over and introduced himself as Bob. He said he was host there.
We talked a while and I thought he seemed like a nice old man. CARLA Carla was early again, the first of the
long time friends to arrive for the weekly get together at the local, small
town sports bar. She loved this place, with the live band every Friday night, a
few well-used pool tables off to one side and softly lit dance floor. She had
been coming here for almost a year now, since her divorce last year, which she
considered one of the smartest things she had ever done. Girl’s night out had
started with some old friends a couple of months ago and was now something she
looked forward to with enthusiasm. Upon entering, she paid her five-dollar
cover charge while making friendly small talk with the girl selling the
tickets. Most nights, she knew everyone in the club. Being in a small town, it
was often the same group of people, made up of young, old, singles and couples.
After getting her ticket, she weaved her
way around the tables and over to the bar to grab a cold beer. Scanning the
faces of the few folks there, she saw him on her way across the floor. He was
sitting there alone in brand new blue jeans, white pressed shirt and black felt
cowboy hat. She always noticed the cowboy hats, although she wasn’t really sure
why. I was sitting there, enjoying my cold beer and the good music and talking to Bob,
when I saw her come in. Couldn’t help but see her with that gorgeous hair. It was to her
waist, dark auburn and wavy. I noticed her jeans were faded, like a comfortable
old pair. Her boots were a little worn too, like she wears them while she
works. CARLA Avoiding eye contact with him, she got
her beer and headed for her favorite seat, a tall stool at the edge of the
dance floor. She was almost there, ready to sit and enjoy that first drink of
ice-cold beer, when she hears the voice from the direction of the cowboy. It
was Bob, the nice old fella who works there as host. EVAN I watched her walk over to the bar and
get a beer. I thought it was kinda funny that she drank beer and not wine
coolers like other women. She had such a natural beauty, not all made up like so many women you see in clubs. She walked around to the side of the dance floor and
headed toward the last stool. I think every head in the place turned when she
walked by. Bob asked, “Would you like to meet her?” I answered, “Of course!” CARLA “Carla,” Bob says, “come over here, there’s someone I want you to meet.” She smiled at Bob and nodded ever so slightly to let him know she had heard. Draping her coat over the back of her seat and putting her clutch deep into the oversized pocket, she headed to the cowboy. Here we go again, she thinks to herself, but not this time! I can’t let it happen again! Her heart had been broken too many times already. Determined to meet him and walk away after a few minutes of simple conversation, she takes a deep breath and shakes his calloused hand. That dreaded eye contact she had avoided so well earlier is finally made. His eyes took her breath away, his smile was contagious. It wasn't long before she realized that small talk that was only supposed to last a few minutes, was long past. She also realized she couldn't walk away. She didn't want to walk away. EVAN We talked for hours. She was funny,
honest and so full of life. We laughed and carried on like we had known each
other for years. I remember thinking to myself, ‘She’s the one.’ I couldn’t
tell her though; it would seem too much like a pick up line. I didn’t tell her
she was beautiful. I didn’t tell her she was amazing. I was afraid any kind of
compliment would have sounded bogus. I just enjoyed her. I enjoyed her laugh,
her voice, her eyes and that hair. I enjoyed how she acted silly when she got a
bit tipsy. CARLA Her girlfriends came in one by one, each
noticing her there, talking to Evan. They came over to meet him, making
comments about how handsome he was. Many beers and several hours later, they
were still talking and laughing, holding hands and feeling as if they had known
each other for years. He wasn’t like the others; he was older,
more mature. At 45, Carla was no spring chicken, but was fortunate to look
years younger. The younger men she had dated since her divorce were only after
one thing, and that had gotten old long ago. But he was different. She could
tell he was genuine and down to earth. He had an honesty about him that was
good and wholesome. He didn’t have to try to impress her; it just came
naturally. She didn’t join her friends that night
for their night out. She would walk over and talk a few minutes every now and
then, but each time found herself going back to Evan. EVAN All too soon it was time to go. ‘Last
call,’ the bartender said. I didn’t intend to ask her to spend the night with me; I’m
not that kind of man. I didn't want her to think I had asked to meet her just to pick her up. I started to say good night, but all I could say was,
“It’s time to go.” I was lost for words when she took my hand and said, “Okay. CARLA She never expected to hear from him
again. Saturday at home was just a lazy day; most of it spent reading a book.
Afraid he might not call, she tried not to get her hopes up. When her cell
phone rang around 3:00 that afternoon, and the display told her Evan was
calling, she was genuinely surprised. “I just wanted to say hello,” he said,
and that hello turned in to an hour-long conversation. © 2012 LindaLou |
StatsAuthorLindaLouLufkin, TXAboutI am a 49 year old college student. I am attending Full Sail University Online for a BFA in Creative Writing for Entertainment. more..Writing
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