Feline Life

Feline Life

A Poem by LindaDilo
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What it's like to be a cat...

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Kittens drinking milk,

playing with the yellow yarn,

jumping up my legs.


The cats like to run,

back and forth back and forth, WEEEE,

they just fell asleep.


Looking at the birds,

pouncing on the blue cat toy,

what a pleasant life.

© 2015 LindaDilo


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LindaDilo
These haikus are inspired by my three kittens. :)

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Well, to be honest, this is a really good poem, but it's a bit immature. The idea is great, and you can surely spruce it up with some 'bigger' words, such as lapping instead of drinking. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LindaDilo

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your review Hazel, something to think about for next time!

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Added on July 10, 2015
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Hello! I am an adventure-seeking language educator who is always looking for the next big challenge. I *love* to write, share ideas, and learn from others. Very glad to join this writing community! more..

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