SIN

SIN

A Poem by Linair

 The world shall fall to the hands of Greed

Power will laugh at all of its need

Lust will reign; Envy descend

See the wars that Wrath will rend

Men will sleep with the onset of Sloth

Gluttony will drown them in sugars and froth

Pride will refuse to believe it’s the end

And the world will die for its SIN

© 2009 Linair


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I love the poem. It's put together so amazingly and it just flows into a beautiful piece. I hate how you have such little faith in life. It's so sad to see my best friend this way. There are good people in this world. There are sinful people on this world. Then there are some in between. That's the thing, there will ALWAYS be a medium. Why not you write about pure love or joy instead of dark and horrible things all the time? I'm beginning to wonder about you. It doesn't help that you have dark encouraging writers and friends whom do nothing but praise your darkness. I know you have light somewhere in you. I should know, of all people.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice work, kinda got me thinking to buy some extra ammo for when this happens lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


Well... That's a pleasant thought. Considering everyone sins at one point. But it's good anyway.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2009

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Linair
Linair

Colorado Springs, CO



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