Give it to me

Give it to me

A Poem by TheSuffering

Please give me your pain.
I want all your sufferings.
Can you please give it to me?
Give it to me and set yourselves free. 
Save yourselves from all of the hatred. 
From all of the jealousy and anger. 
From all of the pain and suffering. 
I want to take it all and carry it on my shoulders.
I want to carry it on my own. 
I don't want you to suffer.
I want you to be free. Free from corruption. 
I want you to be free from arrogance and bitterness. 
It harms your souls. 
Please, give it to me. 
I want you to be free from harmful lust. 
I want you to be free from violence. 
I want to set you free, free from war.
I want you to be free from your weapons.
I want you to not NEED the weapons. 
I want you to understand each other. 
I want you to understand that all of this is inevitable
I want to set your free from conflicts.
Conflicts that tear your soul apart. 
I want to take it all and carry it on my shoulders. 
But I can't. 
The pain and guilt of not being able to, is greater than the entire pain that exists in this world. 
Please, give it to me. 

© 2019 TheSuffering


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Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Take upon yourself the sins of the world? It has a messianic sound to it. It would be nice if all of human pain could be discarded at one time, but I believe we'll have to evolve out of it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


TheSuffering

5 Years Ago

Yeah, I know it's something we all collectively have to take responsibility for but I still want it,.. read more

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TheSuffering
TheSuffering

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I am a 21 year old... girl or woman? Something in between, maybe. I was a weird child. In the midst of war, with no electricity and barely any food or water sometimes, I used to light a candle and r.. more..

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