Always a day late

Always a day late

A Poem by Lina Lotus

when the sun sleeps
my demons awake
thats when I search
for your hand

but you're never here
you're always a day late

in times when my soul dies
i hit the ground
asthmatic heart gasping for life

i wait for your voice
there's no reply

i think I might drown
silence around
you're always a day late

i howled to the moon
held agony's hand
it craddled me deep, far into the night

now Daylight makes way
it crawls through the cracks
of my broken world
i don't remember his name

just wish to forget
and just for today
i'll lick all my wounds
and pray for the sunrays to carry me home


© 2015 Lina Lotus


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So many strong statements made in the poetry.
"i howled to the moon
held agony's hand
it craddled me deep, far into the night"
I understand and I like the above lines. I did like the hopeful ending. New day, new opportunities. Thank you Lina for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Years Ago


this reminds me of a battle,good and evil,but your love is somewhere else

Posted 8 Years Ago


"And pray for the sunrays to carry me home" Very nice line. A good poem.


Posted 8 Years Ago


asthmatic, wow. I've seen the fear in peoples eyes that have had it. The desparation can be horrendous when the one you want is not there to comfort you. You describe things in a way that drive home the emotions involved. Glad you're here. Welcome to WC.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Absolutely terrific write! It's to bad always a day late, that's sad. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lina Lotus

9 Years Ago

Thanks Jamestown. I appreciate your comment. I will check out your writes once I get the hang of thi.. read more

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