Mind

Mind

A Poem by Riv

I have that I want to write.
I don't have a way to.
I don't know what to write.
So... I ended up with this.

© 2015 Riv


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Riv
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dan
I think I owe you an apology. I don't know what I was thinking when I read this write, but I see now (helped by other reviewers below) that you were expressing frustration due to the dreaded block. We all go through it, Riv. One of the things I do when blocked is keep a pen and notepad handy. When I'm watching tv or some other non-actually-doing-anything (lack of) activity, I may have an offbeat thought or two. I jot them down, maybe a sentence, just a phrase...anything. You'd be surprised at how many pieces I've written based solely on a single thought, phrase. Keep the faith, it will come back. Good luck. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


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The mind block
Oh my
I hope it doesnt come back
because i was frustrated like crazy
like crazy
i was crazy lol

i know this too well

tonight i am gonna create something
so i am excited besides writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


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dan
I think I owe you an apology. I don't know what I was thinking when I read this write, but I see now (helped by other reviewers below) that you were expressing frustration due to the dreaded block. We all go through it, Riv. One of the things I do when blocked is keep a pen and notepad handy. When I'm watching tv or some other non-actually-doing-anything (lack of) activity, I may have an offbeat thought or two. I jot them down, maybe a sentence, just a phrase...anything. You'd be surprised at how many pieces I've written based solely on a single thought, phrase. Keep the faith, it will come back. Good luck. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Riv, C'mon man...you can do better than this. No offense but this reads like a throwaway idea. Sorry, but I call 'em as I see 'em. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


Riv

9 Years Ago

xD alright then, that was the point anyway.
Writers block. Welcome to the club...lol. Something will hit you with inspiration eventually. Just take a read through some poems, and stories.

Posted 9 Years Ago


When my mind is blank. I read a 100 poems or a good book. I do understand this poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and words.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


I know this all too well... you sit down ready to go and, nothing. It's tough being a writer sometimes! Hope you get past this writer blockage!

Posted 9 Years Ago


well said Riv, it's even worse when you think of a line then wait to write it down only to find when you do that you can't remember it lol, that's my curse, at least you got a stanza out of your's my friend :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometimes the limited release of our thoughts on paper, no matter how small or the content will trigger a great write. Just have to get the energy flowing to find focus. Nice. Thanks,

Posted 9 Years Ago


Any poet or writer will definitely relate to your words. Clever.!

Posted 9 Years Ago


hahahaha very clever you are in this entertaining write

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Alright, let's do this. My name is Riv or Abby. Either one works. I'm eighteen years old and really love writing poetry on my spare time. While I do write novels and wish to publish one or a few one d.. more..

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