Turning on me

Turning on me

A Poem by Riv

The words are against me,
no matter how many ways you say it.

You can't help it,
I know that. 

But,
it doesn't make it hurt any less.

© 2015 Riv


Author's Note

Riv
It always has to be about you, because at home, it's never about you.

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Good work. Concise, elegant and evocative.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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LimnoH, How easily and, at times, unintentionally words can do damage that is sometimes too much wrong to ever be made right. A multitude of meaning in six brief lines. Saying a lot with little fanfare is the mark of a truly good write...AND writer! take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


concise - to the point LimnoH but also convey the hurt so well. The Authors note are bitter and a good way to outlet and they are better out of the poem because they would take away from it.
Cool one!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Straight talk! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Riv
Riv

Apple Valley, CA



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Alright, let's do this. My name is Riv or Abby. Either one works. I'm eighteen years old and really love writing poetry on my spare time. While I do write novels and wish to publish one or a few one d.. more..

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