LimnoH, How easily and, at times, unintentionally words can do damage that is sometimes too much wrong to ever be made right. A multitude of meaning in six brief lines. Saying a lot with little fanfare is the mark of a truly good write...AND writer! take care...dan
concise - to the point LimnoH but also convey the hurt so well. The Authors note are bitter and a good way to outlet and they are better out of the poem because they would take away from it.
Cool one!
Alright, let's do this. My name is Riv or Abby. Either one works. I'm eighteen years old and really love writing poetry on my spare time. While I do write novels and wish to publish one or a few one d.. more..