Silenced by You

I'm very down, I guess.

A pain so deep,

 

I do not even know where it came from.

 

My emptiness goes on, for as long as the eye can see;

Even more.

 

My voice is silenced, you cannot hear me chime for you, anymore.

 

Thus, shattering me deeply, as you move on, unable to find me.

To hear me.

 

So I lay a rest, upon a cold stone.

 

Water drains, as I remain, quiet.

 

So screams are herd, I don't even try.

I'm dead- On the inside.

 

Immortality was a blessing, but now, I'm not so sure.

 

As I lay a-float, waiting, death hasn't pulled me under yet.

 

I'll never forget you, one memory that will never fade.

 

It seems that is all I do; Is think about you.

No matter what I feel.

 

And hear I lay- Silenced by you- No screams are herd, for I do not try.

 

Even when I did, you could not find me.

 

And all I can think about is you-

 

and how you;

 

ruined my life.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is a very touching but painful writing.. we all feel terrible when someone has had a bad impact on us.. I choose to turn it positive by thinking it just makes me stronger but sometimes thoughts like this creep in our heads!!! I thank you for sharing your emotions and your piece flowed nicely.. it shows the darker side of us and we should embrace both sides... =)

[Aludra]

This poem especially has a deep, mysterious aura.

These lines: "So screams are herd, I don't even try. I'm dead- On the inside. Immortality was a blessing, but now, I'm not so sure." gave me a shiver. I wonder.. If it's a curse? The pain that was caused might mend from time, but the scars that remain are forever, left behind. All the moments flown by, and the tears now dried. The memories are recorded forever in our book of deeds that will remain possibly ever, even after our time.