The Wake of Destruction

I never thought it would hurt so much as they said,

but it does, and I cannot stand the pain,

it is unbearable,

ridiculous amount of endless darkness fogging my way.

Like the burning of a cigarette constant on your skin,

like the blade to your arm again and again,

a raging, nagging feeling to your heart.

You have demolished me.

I am no more than an empty shell of all that I was,

and I guess this is what I must walk around as.

If I could turn back the time,

Just go back for three minutes, dear.

I would change our paths forever,

and cause this path of destruction to end.

We would never meet, never suffer,

peaceful.

We would live our own separate lives.

However, is it fate that had brought us together?

It is a constant war, this thought that boils in my mind.

We are not who we are,

we lay in the wake of destruction my darling.

Author's Note

ignore grammar/spelling errors.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Brilliant! You're quite good at writing and I think, this poem's one of my favourites, no matter what. I've always believed that the stuff having depth of words and the composition of emotions is all what seemed helpful to conquer the kind hearts. And, such feelings've come on my mind when I spent my time with this marvelous poem. You dig it! Every word you chosen to paste with the write is reflecting the moisten sensations of faith to this wide universe along the warmth of your choice of talent. Keep it up the excellent work!

[Limitality]

I am grateful for your words, this piece is actually one of own favourites as well and to hear that someone appreciates it, well it's just amazing. I thank you kind sir! I dig it :)

[Wórdsmíth]

An honour to me to have you and your wonderful stuffs in my heart. Yeah... you just dig it miss Goldy.. keep on! ;)

[Limitality]

Haha :D ! You too Mr. Smith, and a honor to have yours in mine; your work is truly fantastic!

[Wórdsmíth]

Well... am glad to hear your rosie words. Much appreciated! What more I can write ' bout you is just 'Excellent' in all verses of beauty. You're far kind ;)

[Limitality]

I'm glad to hear! And as are you sir :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Well..sweetheart if you want then you can call me 'Smith" rather than 'Sir'. I'd love being called ' Smith' through your lovely muse. But, the rest of all it up to your kind heart whatever it allows you to call me 'Smith' or 'Sir'.. I'd appreciate with the depth of my variant heart ;)

[Limitality]

Well if I simply had a name for you Sir, I could call you that. :) I'm Justyna, the pleasure is mine

[Wórdsmíth]

For now, you can go with ' Smith'... yours truly 'Smith'. Well..if you call me 'Sir' then you can call me..afterall.. it makes me more adorable across your heart. Oh.. Justyna? Well..A very beautiful name you've got..Miss Goldy. Your name's as prettiest as you indeed. Btw, Nice to meet you. My time's just shined up having you around the world.;)

[Limitality]

I am glad to hear :) Thank you for your kind words, I'll carry them with me :)