The Change in Me

I want to see life through your eyes.
I want you to see past my disguise.
I want to feel how you do.
I want to see things clearly.
Search them through and through.
So that I can see you.

I wanted to be the one who loves everyone.
Instead I learned to hate.
I wanted to be the one they invited.
Instead I stood at the gate,
And waited.
I waited for you to let me in.
I'm sick of always losing!
Instead i wanted to win.

I'll teach you how to breathe
How to be free.
How to love.
I'll teach you to rise above.

All the hate

Every lie.
I'll love you.
You don't have to cry.

You cry for change
You want to be new
I will be there
to help you.
You can't lie to me anymore.
I am something real.
You won't take that from me.
You can't change the way I feel

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A very thought provoking and sad poem yet uplifting in a sense in its honesty and defiance.

[Conner Is Dead 2/14/1..]

Good Poem :)

[Arabdha]

a lot of emotions lurk behind this write..
"I am something real.
You won't take that from me.
You can't change the way i feel"..
girl you definitely know how to voice your thoughts..well done :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

this is a sad but inspiring poem...

[sentimental~ galore]

This was really sweet and sorrowful...i liked that it was striaght to the point, no playing around the thought...just laid it all out.

[fatalsymphonies]

Wow, i understand this, its beautifull. "Ill teach you how to breathe"

Beautiful

[whitfitt]

This is so relevant to my life right now. Beautiful writing! Keep it up.

[2Real2BTrue]

Beautiful. This is going into my favorites!

[trainwreck]

This is so sweet! I love it so much! Please keep writing all the time!