From Dusk to Dawn

I know it is kind of short, so if you could message me on things to add to it, please do. Thank you!

No one to be seen,

All desolate and black 

A faint glimpse of the moon

From dusk to dawn

Your worries will go away

And the secrets will come out

The worst things will happen

From dusk to dawn

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i always feel "less is more"---
especially in poetry, when we are allowed to add our own lines between the lines...and maybe the secrets are meant to come out...to come clean in other words.
there is a faint light...faint hope...and maybe with the dawn...a new spring.
j.

[poetgurl]

This is so wonderful, enjoyed

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This is have great flow also great turning point on the end. I really like it.

[REMIGIUS SUNDAY EZE]

It's brief and to the point. I like it. But next time make it more poetic by employing rhyming pattern.

[Matthew Kult]

Nothing wrong with short. Just keep plugging along.

Matthew