Dream Partner

Dream Partner

A Poem by Lily Sage

Somewhere at the back of my drawer,
behind old pens, forgotten business cards, random keys and odd papers, 
is the crumpled bullet point list describing my dream partner.

© 2016 Lily Sage


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J.A
I love that everything about this poem show items that are neglected. The second line just scream of occupation/work items: pens, cards, keys, paper.
But even the description of the speaker's dream partner is in a bullet point list.
The speaker seems to have forgotten their "dream", and what was important to them once in their life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lily Sage

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review! :)



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J.A
I love that everything about this poem show items that are neglected. The second line just scream of occupation/work items: pens, cards, keys, paper.
But even the description of the speaker's dream partner is in a bullet point list.
The speaker seems to have forgotten their "dream", and what was important to them once in their life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lily Sage

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review! :)

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