X.XII.VII.How?

X.XII.VII.How?

A Poem by LilyGrace

How does love turn to hate?

How can joy turn to pain?

Why can't things just stay the same?

It hurts too much to go through change.

© 2009 LilyGrace


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it aches in my heart... i love your poems

Posted 16 Years Ago


the question of humanity in 4 lines....I like it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


i have wondered this question myself many times. how the greatest thing in the world, love, could turn into the worst thing in the world, hate. i really like you poem. thank you for your review. i do love your poems.

Posted 16 Years Ago


short and very powerful....nice work


be well....
"ink flows from my pen as the thoughts flow from my soul..."
s.davis

Posted 16 Years Ago


simple and to the point.
i like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Short, sweet, and right to the point. I love it for it hits home with me hard. Everyone always says change is good but in my life those instances have been few and far between though I still try to approach them with a positive outlook. Nicely done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Turn, turn ... and the forces of change seem strong than ... stay, hurts ... and the forces of stability. The conflict between the two is in all of us to some degree and I suspect ebbs and flows depending on where we are in our trajectories. Change is often exciting and refreshing, yet many hate it. And there IS a lot to be said for a quiet life at least occasionally, right? Your poem captures the conflict succinctly.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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LilyGrace
LilyGrace

Welwyn Garden City, United Kingdom



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I'm a student. I work hard, I party hard, and I'm full of angst and confusion, as any self-respecting student is. I don't pretend to be extraordinarily talented, but I'm not bad. I love to write, and.. more..

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