Time

Time

A Poem by Lily
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This honestly isn’t one of my favorites but i asked chat gpt which one he liked the most and he said this one is the best written

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The hourglass is running. But now faster than it ever was. I try to catch the sand grains. They slip through my fingers. I try to look how much is left but i will never see never know. So i stop trying and start to focus on the sand that is falling down now.

© 2024 Lily


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thats a good description, keep going

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Impressive writing. Enjoyed reading

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lily

1 Month Ago

Thank youu that means a lot to me

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Added on July 26, 2024
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I am just a teenager who likes to write. But i have never shared it with anyone and im scared to so i don’t actually know if it’s good. more..

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