Alive

the connection between

the two

was elegant and

breathtaking. 

almost surreal in a way. 

he brought out 

pieces of her that  

didn't even know existed.

he made her feel 

genuine and real.

for the first time

she felt

alive. 

Reviews

[GwenLark]

I like this so much! Well done

[Najam Us Saher]

Love that is most true, hurts the most. Likewise, love that is unexpected makes one feel alive. I really liked this one. Keep going.

[Kate Z.]

Yes. This is what true love does, it brings out the good, the best, in the other, things unknown to him or her before. I love this poem. Thanks for sharing.

[k.s.]

Thank you so much! This is my first time sharing my writing so I really appreciate the positive feedback.