TRANSPARENT

 

TRANSPARENT

 

You are so transparent

I see through you

All the things that you wish to hide

Why lie to me

I know what you are hiding from me

Your heart has gone away from me

No, I do not like that you have left me

But, man up… tell me the truth

Transparency is not a good look for you

I will put on my blinders and no longer stare

Trying to see your heart

You don’t want the examination

Nor do I wish to give it any more

The hurt that I receive when I go out of my way

To see through you to try and help and please you

And yet you still hide from me

That's FINE...I have stopped the deep soulful looks

Because just like you…I just don’t give a DAMN any more

Author's Note

Reviewers...some say that they are expecting more (another verse). However, I want this one to end here. Saying what is needed and walking away. When too much is said we continue in toxic relationships. Let it go!!! Thanks for your concern though. It is just a poem.

Reviews

[Legion]

It's okay for what you are trying to say in it, but push it a bit further. Get into detail the angst and anger that you feel within from this lout. It would make this much more dramatic. I hope that makes sense.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Wonderful expression of emotions in such a succint write. Well done. I am thankful this was shared with me!
Love and Light,
SiddARTha

[Dom]

There is a lot of strong emotions in this ecspecially anger. I really liked it. Great job! :)

[Tina Kline]

A lot of hurt in this one which is very understandable. A person needs to know when to walk about but that can hurt like hell. Great job on this!

[Ladysue]

wow, it is very hard to sustain that kind of energy when someone is not willing to go to the distance for whatever reason. This was very heartfelt and the ending was that of strength. Very well done...

[THE LOST ROSE]

Love the attitude and the power behind it. It sounds like you got something off of your chest. Good for you! Keep living, search and writing.