TAKE OVER

TAKE OVER

 

Alarm blaring in my ear

Waking and groaning as I hit the clock

Falling back on the pillow

Wondering if I could pull off calling in sick

My next thought is of you

Wishing you were my excuse for staying in bed today

Snuggling up to my pillow for fifteen minutes more

Thinking of your warm body next to mine

Also of your 2am phone-sex call

Does that count in the booty call category

Pushing myself from the bed

Starting my day dripping with need for you

Driving to work with clips of you and I together

As the day progresses my thoughts keep coming back to you

Listening to audiobooks, certain parts make me need you more

My ride back home for a half hour is filled by you

Coming home busy with this and that

Still you keep entering my mind

My day has been consumed by you

Now as I lay myself down to sleep

I wonder, will my dreams be of you

And if you will take over my thoughts again tomorrow

Reviews

[Ladysue]

I agree with Beth, I love the way you captured this need. Very heartfelt and endearing. Beautifully written...

[THE LOST ROSE]

Hey Jade, you know i am a fan of yours i love this piece. I could highlight the whole poem but what bought me to my feet was this stanza;

Starting my day dripping with need for you
Driving to work with clips of you and I together
As the day progresses my thoughts keep coming back to you

If a women spoke that way to me I'll be shopping for a ring. LOL. Great work thanks for the awesome mental ride. I'll be back!

[Vin]

I love the way you have captured the essence of needing someone, to the extent where you literally cannot stop thinking about them. Well done!

-Beth

[BlessedLove]

oooooh! nice! heart-warming...that yearning for more after you've been graced with the presence of your heart-throb! man, I love this 1!